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[Suave]

Wasn't bad, but it felt kind of repetitive you know?
By about half way through its near a copy paste for the last half of the song which gets a little redundant for a house mix because you can do anything with a house mix

Now fine, fine, I get that its house, which negates that, and it can be anything, it really wants to be, but it's mostly the same chords, the same beats, and the same sounds all the way through

Would love to see more variation on this track

memad responds:

Thanks for the feedback :)

I learn more and more everyday.

the reason it sounds mostly the same is because it's the same chopped sample, so I only had a limited selection of chords.

[8-bit Hero]

holy wow that was loud!
you dont need to put the volume up at 150%
did like the way that you put things together on this one, very classic

[New Grade]

Nice opening to this song, liked the horn variant as well.

Might want to change up the horn sounds around 1.50, and then continue to play around with the horn up to your low point at about 2.45
Other than that, I have nothing to really get picky about throughout the rest of the song

[Turn The Beat Back]

Liked the song, remember, you can include fades, moving different sounds from left to right speakers, and volume levels of certain sounds :3

ROUGE responds:

oh sh*t i forgot to do those ahhhh

[#Selfie (KC)]

The first thing that came to mind... Crazy Frog.

I would re-classify this as an electronic house instead of a dance,
Also id look back at the clapping you added in at around 1.12, while it does give a nice first user kind of feeling, I'd think you are above that kind of thing

KennyChu responds:

cool. thx for the kind review!
yes the clap may be bit over. my first attempt on this song!
i gain inspiration or if something come up to mind I just remixing it.

[Ethereal]

Use more layers on the base line, add more beats than just a solid: one TWO one TWO
You can also add more layers for the background noise too! Go wild with it!
Don't make a 3 layer, make a 10 layer :o

Enjoyed what you did with the electro lead on this though.... Very... back to basics and hard lined results

KennyChu responds:

yeah, need a bit of work on some of the sounds.

[Spiritual Sunday]

The bells and things at 0.50....
Might want to revise that... Maybe take out the 6 bell sounds that all overlap each other in a .05 time frame
Might try splicing it and using it in other places as well, or get rid of the sounds all together

Other than that, I'm bopping along to this yo :3

[badband]

I would go back to the fundamentals that you had in your audio file listed as "first"
You had a good thing going there, and then you are heading down a path that makes it all sound like garbage

The only good thing about this file is that it makes a good loop because i can't tell where it starts and ends for the most part

Tarteviant responds:

thanks was just playing around with some effects and backbeats

[Basshunter_-_Syndrome__Janze r]

Listened to it a few times, and all i can say is i would have liked to hear what you would have down with a run up at about 2 minuets where you focus on a single thing, then bring in a few more layers and then hit the listener over the head with the awesomeness you got going on throughout the song

[-Korp- Storm]

Liked how you started this song off with the gentle sounds, then kicked off your electronic start
Didn't like that you had the same... one TWO three FOUR... All the way through, but that can be changed up by changing up the bass line from your 3 layers that you have now, to a 6 and then have them alternate, i would love to hear what you would do with a 7 bass line layer system

Can't complain about the length and with it, your main electronic lead, if you extended it though I would add in a low side to include a downturn and then a up turn in the audio to get the song back on track

Also very good use of the higher sounds that can be herd at 1.16
its a nice touch