tox's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sherlock- Pursuit (Piano)]

If this is a real life track you are very tallented and should hold your head high for your abilities with your hands

If this is a audio program recording... Holy hot cheese damn!
Its perfect for rhythm and timing, very poppy and tight

Either way this track is amaxing for the standard quality of the audio portal, keep doing..... This

Civicus responds:

Yeah, this is one of the songs that I have posted on here that I can play irl. Most of my other songs are done by recording each part individually and putting it all together. Thank you for the input!

[I dunno]

If you listen to 70 funk you can hear that most tunes like this flow like a lava lamp

Gotta move, gotta groove... Gota get sexyyyy

You are close!
Shorten down your run on lengths of tracks, add different sounds, and make it flooowwww

[カブキもOh! の Kunoichi B]

Asian themes are usually very spaced out and rythmic for what they sound like, even when the song is re made into a dance, or techno or electronica song the music itself retains a very spaced out format of note/revibe/revibe/ repeat. pp
Drum and base is note/revibe repeat ff
Rock is note/note/note/revibe revibe revibe ffff

Start with a slow song when you are making a oriental piece, then commonly a increase in play speed is what will kick it up to a video game or electronica song

Oh-Sama responds:

Thanks for your suggestions but to be honest I'm a hobbyist musician my friend :)
I'll try to keep in mind some of what you've said!

[Coyo91 - Caustic Prism]

Yeah... I can hear the bass you added and its bery clear too...

But at 7.7 mb its a very large file

Equally for a dance song, it did not get me up... Or even hopping my leg around

Unfortunately not your best work

[Attack on Titan Theme]

Iabsoluty have to agree with frankvg on this

Volume adjustment is a must in music
You might want to just try your hand at getting the song and re-producing it into a song on your own machine...

If the song plays a few chords, go find some syncs in your library that qould fit the sounds...

Or maybe play ot out in piano or a different instrument

[EvenJellion]

I like that you are playing with near audible sounds, and like wise
You are on the right track for that

Think of other things like focusing sounds to the left and right,
The 2:20 ish was really clever too, how you can make a beat with the absence of a beat

This song could sound a lot. Lot. Better if you tried more.
But
For the ideas that you are presenting in this song, the skills that you are getting better at, and off beat originality of the piece... I will give you a 4.5 star on this
(rounded up on the score too ;p )

[MegaMan 9 (ConcreteManMIX)]

You did a good job on this track, it follows a level of a game easily
I would like to see you start the song differently, but for the vast majority of the tune, you made a good track

[Yajurveda Parallax]

Go listen to a few trance songs bud...

Your bass is too high
Voices are rare and for the purpose of whar you did way to muffled and quiet
And you have your bass and front tracks backwards...
The tune should come out a little louder, the bass should blend backwards

[Ex-NESLovers]

Id say stick with just the video game music bud...
The vocals..... Your vocals are holding ya back

Czyszy responds:

Yup, i can't agree more; I'm aware that my vocals aren't all that great. Definitely need more practice.

[Grimluck's Throne]

I would see this in a mario game or a legend of zelda game.

Perfect job.
Saved.
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